I wrote this poem last year, in 7th grade, and I wanted to put it on my blog because this poem was about the struggles my grandpa faced when he was fighting Lung Cancer, and what it was like for me to loose him. However, just some back-round information about my grandpa's sickness: he had Lung Cancer from smoking and everyone thought his death was near, but on April Fool's we found out his Lung Cancer was gone, finite. Turns out god was playing on April Fool's joke on us because a few month's later it came back and he died, so our worries, and his sickness were always rocking back and forth and jumping up and down, scared for the next news.
Little Blue Boat
The Little Blue Boat
Chimes
Then sways
The Little Blue Boat
Swims
And swifts
The Little Blue Boat
Pulls
And Turns
The Little Blue Boat
Pushes
And
Struggles
That Little Blue Boat
Slips
And sinks
Deep
Beneath
Our souls
That's a really beautiful poem Nina and it really touched me. I love the ending and you can tell that you really put feeling into this poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Janou! I miss my grandpa.
ReplyDeleteThis post is really beautiful, the poem as well. I'm sorry for your loss, I think the poem really showed what he went through.
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